Your alive your pen is alive and so so is your mind that starts these poetic thoughts downward to the hands :0)

I really wanted to give you such a hug on this one
it is truly a stunning poem

5/5

For me u have bcm one of d most talented poet ..
D whole poem is so wel writen and expresd i cant tel u..
And d flow is so smooth ..
Brilliant..kristi..
Love u fr dis one..
5/5

Heart touching. and deep with great and strong emotions of pain. good work once again :)