Comments : Fool's Gold

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Fool's gold baby
    That is all you turned out to be
    I thought it was her
    But the joke is me

    ^My favourite stanza, I love title being portrayed here,
    throughout the poem the flow was flawless and the rhymes were great too, not forced at all.

    such a sad poem that I am sure many can relate to,
    love
    Tara
    x