Comments : The Little Lie

  • 12 years ago

    by Georgia

    Wow this is really powerful.. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jeremy S Farley

    Well done. You can always tell the difference when something comes from the heart. Bitter and emotionaly charged. Great description. Love it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jeremy S Farley

    Well done. You can always tell the difference when something comes from the heart. Bitter and emotionaly charged. Great description. Love it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    I think the title fits very well and I have to agree to Jeremy, the feelings you convey with this write are very powerful. Even if I didn't know what you are refering to, I'd still know by reading this poem and I can actually feel the anger and disappointment in your words yet you're strong enough to not let anyone treat you like this.