Oh,
I have nothing to say, this was flawless, the flow was rock solid and the wording was awesome, you did a lovely job, I love the way you retold the first stanza at the end with a few change of words, a dark yet mysterious piece,
so much potential, and talent

love
Tara
xxx

Mysterious and a bit scary.
The flow was awesome. Your word of choice as well. It also rhyme, I can't find anything wrong with it.

Immediately cajoling from the LOTR reference there - 'Amon Hen'. Wonderful piece of poetry here, and epic in every literal sense. I'm a rings fanatic, and therefore look forward in profound excitement to read more of your work. Great work.