Beautiful from the heart.
You created a heartfelt poem.
5/5

Absolutely amazingly done like always..loved every stanza ..perfect write..1000/1000!

Truely from the heart
an amazing write

i could feel the emotion in this!
wording was brilliant too in my eyes

kinda makes me want to start writing love poetry again...

5/5 from me

Flawless<3

Loved it the simple wording but deep meanings made this a very touching piece.

5/5

Flawless<3

Loved it the simple wording but deep meanings made this a very touching piece.

5/5

Hey,

What a heartfelt poem.

So heartbreaking. I felt every word.

The poem to me was like a final goodbye to someone you really LOVE (still love) however there's this question and wondering hope if you can let this person back into your life? Part of you believes it is over and the other wants him back.

I think there are any people who feel the same way at one time or another. It happens a lot with first love (happened with me)

Well written and had a nice flow. Loved this poem!

Liz

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Beautiful flow and the imagery just sparked through my mind. Great job as always, love.

5/5

-Heather

Awwww... Wow this poem was so sad, emotional and heartfelt. I like the way you penned these emotions. The second stanza was my favorite. Great job hon!