Tbh i thought this was to long. .. But saything that i thought your word choice and flow was perfect. . A well penned piece x

I loved the flow, love the feeling within I got reading it and how I could vision in between the lines, from the pain, hurt and even positive outlook to come

As far as too long I personally don't think one can be too long as long as it gives the reader what is being felt from the writer and releases some within the reader. You did that perfectly I think

5/5

Wow! This is a bit sad because of letting go of love is always tough, but you captured how you feel so gentle and lovely that even this break up poem is beautiful in it's own unique way. I really enjoyed reading this, I saw the title and had to read it. Amazingly beautiful. 5/5. Real talent, hope you are doing well, love is always tough. Love if you would read a little more of mine.