Woaah, this could be a song

a good poem, though very sad
keep smiling!
flow was amazing

keep it up!
5/5 from me

Dark and sad.. excellent for its written in rhymes. :)

Aww girl.
This is filled with such heartbreak and sadness. You can visualize the crying actually happening. I love this, but I wont ever betray you girl<3

5/5

"betrayed by friends and family
loved ones
and it all takes a toll"

hit me like a brick that part
it does take its toll on us and it does
hurt like I thought no words could say

but this poem says it really well and says it with
what emotion of sadness

this is a truly deep and special poem 5/5

What a sad and heartfelt poem.

It makes me think of the many times I have cried myself to sleep or cried uncontrollably.

Well written! A poem that connects well with the readers

Thank u very much

Wow how amazing this is, what can I say you did a really ggod job writing this :)

This was so powerful and deeply emotional. I agree with Something Diabolical (abover commenter) that this could be a song. For some reason this piece made me think of kelly clarksons song because of you as I couldm imagine a piano playing to your words just like in her song

5/5

Thank u all so much,,,I really appriciate it