Comments : The Obelisk

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    These stanzas were my most favorite out of this great poem

    Standing sentry over the city,
    peak of strength and power;
    solitary, yet surrounded by beauty.

    The lights of the city,
    pinpricks of white and gold;
    like stars on land, glittering beneath its watchful stare.

    - fantastic write wonderfully done I loved this poem with terrific wording amazingly done just wow :) 5/5