Comments : Wish

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Very sweet poem, short but very meaningful. Favorite line "I've wished upon a broken star.
    That someone would come from afar"
    The fact that the star is broken is powerful to me because it tells the reader something broken can offer hope.

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Ya,as snowy said, short,simple yet powerful,meaningful..
    Kinda remind me of times wen i had wishd to bring someone who loves me more then anything ..hold my fears before me.
    Sing a song on the rhythm of my hrtbeats..
    Joy of new love..