Oh, Kristian.
This is a really amazing piece which tells about hopes for future.. and those emotions that lie deep within.. :)

It was refreshing, in deed.

Awww!!! I very much enjoyed this poem! I love the sadness and sweetness of this poem, I guess what you've described is bittersweet. I love the title, and the opening stanza and final stanza, how they are relevant to the title.

I like the hope, but also the hidden truth of this poem... I know I can relate to this poem a lot! It really touched me! Great job sweetie!

The start was good but later on this poem made me sad. good like a story.....

you poems are so simple and nice flowing... easy to read for me.. i love simplicity. and i love your poems