Comments : Scarred

  • 13 years ago

    by L

    It's good.

    ---I particularly like the last stanza.
    I found this to be a bit different and there are a few typos other than that is great.

    ^A tragic-ending masterpiece,
    Life is not meant to be;
    My book of love left incomplete,
    My shattered soul scarred deep..

  • 13 years ago

    by L

    It's good.

    ---I particularly like the last stanza.
    I found this to be a bit different and there are a few typos other than that is great.

    ^A tragic-ending masterpiece,
    Life is not meant to be;
    My book of love left incomplete,
    My shattered soul scarred deep..