I love love love this poem it's amazing and wonderful and i relate in a way
a fantastic great wonderful lovely beautiful poem and i love u :) 5/5

Oh god Holly, this is so sweet. I loved how you used the third person all through the poem. The thoughts and words just flawed with an ease. It seems that they were really meant to be :)

Great one.
5/5

Well, well.

The flow was great, you stated your point really clear and even though i can't relate much, I still like it.

I like the questions, it shows that you really ponder on your final decision.

Even though it was a bit cliche in wording I think the emotional value out weighed that. Leaving the reader with a soft warm feeling.

Connie

This is a really good poem I find my self in the same shoes not knowing what to do.