Aw :)
i love this. Shows how much he means to you and how much you want to keep him in your life. Great job:). I can feel the emotion as you write it/

5/5

Agn i wud like to say ...ur poems sounds like romantic songs ....this one is dipped in choclate of romance too....
if u write this way ,,,no one nvr gonna let u frgt ...fp

Awww this poem was really romantic and you had a really good flow in parts. You really had your heart on your sleeve well writting this as the poem was so raw

5/5

Another touching poem, words that float above the norm, drifting in the wind of emotion. Excellent write, and he's a very lucky man.

I like this poem

This was so sweet and enchanting. I like the flow but above all, i like your message which is so clear. He or whoever that is, its your world.

Beautiful poem from a beautiful writer :0)

Thanxs bobby ur a great friend :)

Really a sweet and touching poem. I really needed something uplifting. thanks for sharing.

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Yes, ur right, we may have ended on bad terms, but i am glad u kept up on the site to write ur poetry. 5/5

I loved reading this poem, it was really well written. Great write.

5/5 from me.