Comments : What do I do

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I know this feeling :/.

    This pours out sadness & how much you love him.

    Just remember... If someone you love can't forgive you for a simple mistake then they aren't worth it.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    ..time to tame the Past, and name your Future, could be the best thing to do, I believe.. Thank you for sharing this note-worthy piece with us!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    I think this poem has potential. I liked the repetitions and questions because they're very relateable and those are the things one wonders about when they don't have the possibility to be with the one they love.
    I thought it was quite good that you changed the beginning of the verse in the last one, that someone shows that the speaker realized, that those aren't just questions, but "reality".

  • 12 years ago

    by Crimson

    Wow that is really good and basicly says how i feel right now

  • 12 years ago

    by John Dlyan Boone BABY

    Awe i love it great 5

  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Awww :[ i hope this isnt true and hope ur happy cuz ur too pretty to be sad girly :]]

    loving this one <3 5/5