Comments : Breaking Me, Fixing You

  • 8 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Excellent choice of title and I love how you incorporated it into your poem.

    I am sure many people will relate to this as quite often in life the only way to help someone up is to drag ourselves down.

    Your poem really covered this subject so well I couldn't help but be moved by it.


  • 8 years ago

    by Decayed

    That was a really awesome piece.
    It definitely had me moved, especially by the first scenery, on the bathroom floor. The bathroom reflecting the worse emotions posssible. and you really reminded me of Nancy Ajram's song in the bathroom. That was really sad!!

    OMG, your interpretation is so similar to it ;)


    Nominated, next week.

  • 8 years ago

    by believeinlove87


    You would be looking but
    you never see me, you knew
    I would always be there for
    you. But you failed to notice
    that you were breaking me
    everytime I'm here to fix you.
    -This shows how much it hurts you that while you're doing anything to fix things, hes can't even see it.

    I love this poem :). Flowed perfectly with how you do so much for him when hes down & at the end its tearing you apart bcuz you love him.

    Amazing Poem:)

  • 8 years ago

    by Pain

    I must say it is great

  • 8 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    This is amazing meme!!! WOW!! I love it! I can totally relate to this all too well! :) Keep up the good work and keep that smile on! :)

  • 8 years ago

    by RSJ

    What i love about this poem the most my dear
    is that every single person can relate, I sure as hell can relate,

    you write with passion, with a way that shows your feelings in a very accurate manner,
    this left me speechless my friend
    this is worth gold, Platinum
    nominated no bet

  • 8 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Meme I love this! The title caught my eye, and the story you told in this poem was touching. It is very relatable... the idea of helping someone and devoting time to take care of them, when they don't reciprocate your feelings... really nicely done. Great job sweetie!

  • 8 years ago

    by LoVerSLaND

    Beauitful. 5/5