Excellent choice of title and I love how you incorporated it into your poem.
I am sure many people will relate to this as quite often in life the only way to help someone up is to drag ourselves down.
Your poem really covered this subject so well I couldn't help but be moved by it.
7 years ago
That was a really awesome piece.
It definitely had me moved, especially by the first scenery, on the bathroom floor. The bathroom reflecting the worse emotions posssible. and you really reminded me of Nancy Ajram's song in the bathroom. That was really sad!!
You would be looking but
you never see me, you knew
I would always be there for
you. But you failed to notice
that you were breaking me
everytime I'm here to fix you.
-This shows how much it hurts you that while you're doing anything to fix things, hes can't even see it.
I love this poem :). Flowed perfectly with how you do so much for him when hes down & at the end its tearing you apart bcuz you love him.
Meme I love this! The title caught my eye, and the story you told in this poem was touching. It is very relatable... the idea of helping someone and devoting time to take care of them, when they don't reciprocate your feelings... really nicely done. Great job sweetie!