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by H. Elizabeth
Another, beautiful write. I must say, i am in love with your writing, haha.
When you said
She falled hard in the same spiral,
As the others."
I think you meant to put "She fell, she fell hard in the same spiral as the others."
Just a little grammar help. (:"The scars on her arms,
Are there to prove it,
She is already down,
Into that lane.
Depressed at heart,
Smiling each day,
Crying to sleep every night."
This is a great way to put this.
So many of us seem to struggle with depression/self-harm/suicide these days.
This poem so beautifully written, just like your others. I'm excited to read more from you. (:~Hannah E