Comments : Puzzling Difference

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Be free of the shackles and dive into chance.
    Through your poems you'll find the freedom to fly.
    Excellent write

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Agn..i just love evrythin abt dis poem..
    D feel of new love,
    Bt at d same time
    bad memories of past ruining d strength of accpting him..
    Bt at d same time
    realizing dt u r incomplete widout him..and smwhr during d gud and bad thoughts..
    a hrtbeat goes, pumping d blood of new love into ur veins and let u knw ..he is meant fr u..

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    What I love about this poem is the fact that the emotions can be felt and that they are real.

    There are always doubts within new relationships especially if you've had bad relationships in the past. You start to compare each person you've ever dated to your current lover.

    Always on my mind
    while I try to figure this out
    it's a puzzle when your gone
    but with you
    everything's in place

    My favourite stanza

    Well written

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