Comments : Heart's Suicide

  • 6 years ago

    by Twyst

    I loved this so much, you should definitely keep writing.

  • 6 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    A wonderful flow to this poem of yours. I thought it magnificent! I would suggest changing "bare" to "bear", but it could very well be that you mean to say "reveal" versus to say "possess". Hope we get to see some newer pieces from you soon!

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