Wow!!!!! This poem was so deep. This is an outstanding write. I know what it's like to feel depressed and alone and you really echoed these sentiments in your poem. I think you conveyed an emotional breakdown really well

5/5

You are like wine just getting better and better each day longer

It is a very well poem that gave me deep feelings of the words going into my soul

I love this. exactly how i feel.

you can see the tears pouring down feeling this
5/5<3

Thanxs :D

I love the rawness of this poem.

There is so much emotion felt with every line. You described so much of what she was feeling. So many people will be able to relate to this

Well written

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