Comments : My personal torturer

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    The ending is just sad yet sort of sweet. :-s
    Confusing.

    But the whole poem is sad. I do understand why is categorize in the love section.
    Because you are in love, it doesn't matter how bad that person treats you or how many times that person rejects you. You still in love.

    The beginning its powerful.

    "My personal torturer
    is what you are to me
    you even have the audacity
    to charge me a fee."

    I also see the some rhymes. The flow went great and your words just fitted right in the place.

  • 12 years ago

    by KDE Joyce

    I really enjoy this stanza:

    Should I be glad?
    or should I be sad?
    All I know is this
    what I really want
    is a kiss

    The flow of the poem is also amazing, I love the rhyme schemes you have in some of the stanzas. Very well written 5/5