Comments : Slow Ticking Of The Clock .

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Nice piece. The emotion and the feeling is clearly describe.
    --Tired of the tears,
    Of the lies and the pain.
    The slow ticking of the clock,
    Slowly driving you insane.--I like the way you end your part here..
    Good poem.:=)

  • 11 years ago

    by C0tt0nxCand3h

    Thank you.(: