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This was a really nice poem :) As poets we tend to "take possession" of our poems by using Me My And I. I am guilty of this as well. Try eliminating them wherever you can
surrounding me in a rore of clouds.
surrounded in a roar of clouds
My mistakes fall from the sky like rain.
mistakes falling from the sky like rain....
U get the idea. Overall though it is a very deep and wonderful poem