Comments : I Can No Longer get Over You

  • 8 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww this poem started out sweet, but ended sad! I still enjoyed it. I loved the first stanza, and I love how it was "the dawn of a sweet relationship" and "love bloomed" .. great choice of words!
    The first was definitely my favorite... Well done! =D

  • 8 years ago

    by Kips

    Thank you for your comment. I'm still recuperating from the hurt. I'll get over it, but it will take some time.

  • 8 years ago

    by Xanthe

    The transition of tones went so smoothly. From a sweet love story to a bitter ending of a relationship. Nice..
    Okay, honestly? I've been looking something to critique haha. Here it is: I advice you to make the title more interesting or thought-provoking. Something that is attention-grabbing, perhaps?
    Other than that, a little typo on shining there. Amazing job as always. Keep writing :)