this was a good poem, it had alot of emotion through it. its a shame that things like that actually go on, im im glad you adressed it. keep up the good work!

Hey Bridget.
That was a very nice poem. You did such a fine job in writing that piece. I liked the flow as well as the wording. This piece was very heartfelt and full of emotion. Thank you for sharing such a fine piece of poetry. Take care always
Kristina

Thank you for your comments. Your right, it is true that this goes on, and the world will never be one good place. But im glad you all like the poem.