Good bye my love,
does love really last?
always and forever
You said it did
but were not together
Did I say something wrong?
What did i do?
You told me i was perfect,
but I'm not with you!
I have someone else who treats me like gold
so its in with the new, and out with the old
so I'm saying good bye
now and forever
but one last time
I wish we were together!

again same thing. this one was your best so far. carried all the weight from what I have read so far. great piece