Comments : True Love

  • 13 years ago

    by Mello193

    I really love you with all my heart
    I knew that from the start
    as time goes by there is so much I want to say
    so many "I Love You's" that went unsaid
    so many hugs that I never got the chance to give
    so many times I wanted to tell you how I felt
    so many times you needed to shout
    I cried many tears and cried many smiles
    and remember I will love you today and tomorrow
    no matter what may bring us
    or the road may take us
    I know that "I Love You"
    they say "true love never dies"
    if that is true know that I will always love you

    this was was lacking. barely rhymed if at all. same thing as all the others. I like your writing and I am merely trying to help, so please don't take it as an insult. I think this piece would be great if you expanded on it, perhaps put more time into it. as i said before if this poem rhymed at all I couldn't find it.