Comments : With You!

  • 13 years ago

    by Mello193

    You said you loved me
    you said you cared
    the feelings you said you felt
    were never there
    you told me; "love lasts forever"
    I guess you lied, because were not together
    there was a point when I knew
    everything you said wasn't true
    even though I knew that
    all I wanted to do is be with you!

    again great piece, full of emotion and like before about is an edited version with correct grammar. hope this helps as well