"Heavens darkened hour my impure thoughts do spare
From wickedness born a fallen angel laid bare.
Spawn from wasteful desires.
Darkness be the one who inspires."

vivid wording, I found the whole poem excellent but that stanza was my favorite it was original, creative and carried the weight of your message

I thank thee kindly, a sense of ancient souls knowing will always be drawn to gather.

Youre good with rhyming stuff. I like rhyming stuff... Anyways, about the poem, its a bit deep, but not too much, making it interesting but not to the point where its looking like its trying too hard. As Ive said earlier the rhymes are good. A real great write all in all. I like it. :)