Although not the best poem i have come across, it does radiate of the true emotions, which you posess and are bringing forth in this well worded poem. Please, i implore that you write more poems like this, they are very inspiring.

As Enaid said its not the best but i do feel you have put power into this piece and that yu do care for our world. It is about time someone did because our world is slowly dieing and once its gone it will never come back.