Aww...

What a wonderful poem, a dedication of love to your beloved.
I enjoyed the beginning and the end, There was just one stanza were I thought the rhymes were a bit off, but girl I just love this piece because I can relate and I found this poem cute, sweet and much more, and corny?
not to me.

And What's a girl to do? Catchy title.

well done. I hope you give this poem to your love.

I absolutely agree with Everlasting. I think this is a really well written poem,it flows really good and the rhymes don't feel forced. It's quite obvious that your words come form your heart and reflect your love for him.

I love this poem for its meaning and the words you express are so very filled with love and emotion.

Simple words yet they are powerful when dedicated to the person that you love.

The rhyming is great

I love the first stanza of the poem. It mentions your love for this person and how you feel the relationship is going

At this point the poem could go in either direction. It could take me to he loves you back or if it is a one way feeling. I want to know so I keep on reading ;)

The second stanza obviously tells me that this person loves you too and both think of the future together which is amazingly sweet!

I like that you mentioned the poem is corny. I think though corny poems can be awesome as they are coming from the heart.

Well written

x

Awww this is such a sweet poem, I'm sure you would love to read it :)

I absolutely love this poem, really one of my favorites.. I dont think it is all that corny, you are saying how you feel, so i dont think it could ever be too corny. i like it alot :)