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  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    This is a good sad poem I have felt ur poems are always vivid and unique I loved it 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    "remembering the way you look so vividly I could draw you perfectly." I love that line from your poem the most because I know sometimes I remember seeing my father in the hospital bed and I can still vividly see him laying there... unable to move...or speak...or anything...

    5/5