Comments : Peace of mind

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I started to get warm just reading this poem. It's summer here but at the moment it's raining and cold.

    I just loved how this poem made me take in a deep breath and ahhhhh get warmed up!!!

    I loved the flow of the words - you painted an awesome picture here and I could definitely see it clearly

    I loved the first stanza - Sitting on the beach music to my soul.

    I love listening to the waves crash as well on the beach. It is so relaxing

    A well written beautiful poem

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