Loved the ending, my dear... I definitely felt every line and every verse you wrote.. It'd get better <3

5/5

I really felt the poem too:) great job, a 5/5 from me

"now shes done,
she has given up on love entirely,
its never different, always the same games,"

that feeling of pain

"what has she done to deserve only getting hurt?
the smile on her face has faded,
replaced with an emotionless expression,
as she says outloud;"

THe emotion of confusion

And the final bow :0(

" I can't let myself care anymore. "

This is what drives at me

Thinking, hey maybe this guy is different,
finally hoping she had found a good guy,
but like always true colors get shown.

A great poem of so many feeling I am getting reading the words hugs

That rhymes & I love it.