I loved this poem. And I loved the comparisson between crying and a flood. Especially how the turned into snowflakes to symbolize distance and loneliness.
I was wondering about the line "(Since the tears came)" is it really necessary? It makes it a lot easier to understand, but clarity isn't always a good thing, in my opinion. I absolutely love the two last stanzas, however, I'm not sure about the stress on "ever". It makes it kinda staggered to read at the end. The stress on "nothing" is great, however!
Beautiful!!:D
Your Words Were Effortless, And Perfectly Fit Together.
I Love Your Style Of Writing! <3
This Poem Was Exspecually Special In My Life Because Of Your Line When You Said "Watching On The Sidelines".. I Feel Like That All The Time.. Loved It:) 5/5