You have to love Haikus!

You have done very well with this one

These fir trees remind me of Christmas trees in December. Though it is Summer in Australia in December it is Winter in many other countries

The use of the words ice crystals reminds me of snow...

And of course the last line reminds me of some beautiful nature filled place covered in snow in Winter time where people go to cut their own trees down at Christmas time

I really love this!!!

Well done

x

Jen Haiku's are my ultimate favorite. what other says so much with so few words.
You can paint the most wonderful images if worded correctly and my friend you have used your colors of paint to dazzle and bring to life something beautiful

I'm always amaze how some poetess can come up with a short piece rather summarize their thoughts in a haiku structure and still give an excellent imagery.
You did an excellent job, this piece connected with me. I was able to not just see trees with snow but a list of movies that I've seen just kept streaming in my mind, Christmas pops up, cold winter yet warm, hot chocolate and bread, hehe I'm going out of topic but good job. I love this piece.

I love it Jenni :) Totally love the image, so wintery, icy, cold.. but refreshing. Amazing job.

Its baaad:P
Hhhhh Im jk, I adore winter, every word in this poem is right in its place, I love it:D
Ofc a 5/5

I loved this Haiku! I liked how you set a picture out in my head using so few words.

5/5

Wow I loved all the words u used it was beautifully written and nicely done ,I loved it and paints a beautiful scene 5/5

Jenni this was a perfect Haiku wonderful job

Well I think your choice of words is really good, great job Jenni

I think you beat TJ's challenge; so congrats! :D
Beautifully written.

5/5

-Heather

Very well done on this haiku Jen- Haiku to me are the trickest to write but you did it..although the shortest of poems yours created a beautiful scene :) Take care
Lostlove1

Majestic scene you have written

Great poem! i really like how you brought the trees and snow to life and dropped them in the scene creating winter in so little words. explosive ; )

Majestic scene indeed, and nice word chioce too. Lovely haiku :)

There is something magical about the seasons and I agree with everyone else the is a beautiful write. I have never heard anyone use trees as an ocean before. That was very interesting to me. But an ocean is very vast so what I thought of first is a vast cospe of trees in a forest of some kind. The scene you paint with just the first line is perfect. Nictating is a great word too and I had to look it up but its so great.

Nictating small ice crystals: what a beautiful write. Now I can imagine a vast forest of trees trickled with snow and ice hanging from it. The last line is great as well because it wraps up the whole poem and what you wanted to say. Snow is a beautiful and not a lot of people look at it as such. I love the title as well because it says what you want to say. Great. 5