Comments : My Son, My Seed

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    This is a really touching and captivating poem. I really like your choice of words because it's obvious that you picked them wisely. They don't only create a vivid image of your son looking up to you while you can't help, but to smile because of him, but also flow really smoothly.
    The feelings are really strong and they pulled me in even more. Overall this is a very well penned poem, which conveys a powerful message.