I actually like the words you chose to describe ideas very fitting. (:

Oh wow this had to have been a tough one.
I agree with the words you choose and it had great flow. well done TJ

"I'm not sure if I should thank you for this one LOL:-)"
Made me laugh haha. :P

Well I am actually glad about challenging you to write this form because I had faith that you'd manage to come back with a great poem and voila here it is. I like the content of the poem and how you dealt with it. There's nothing I'd fault, you did a great job just as I had expected though it turned out even better than I thought.

Dude this is an awesome piece and an extremely intriguing challenge. A bit hard, but theres nothing that you cant do. You totally pulled this one off.

As I tend to go overboard with the comments, I will keep this one short.

Ideas are like an abstract concept which appear as an image at times and as a context at times. It is difficult to reason with an idea that is absurd, but it dwells in our minds like a splinter. Ideas will inspire generations, give a kick start to the dormant conscious.

And yes, ideas that once pop up, are hard to be denied until they are acted upon, or at least planned or perceived upon.

A stellar attempt bro.

Unique and well written! 5/5

mandy :)

This is new to my eyes.

But it's kind of cool :)

Once we stop growing, we start dying. An essential part of growth is dreaming, of ideas emerging inside your head. To make them reality is up to the individual.

Nice work on the format, TJ:)

5/5 Ingrid

All ideas we should aspire too and you have presented them very well in this form. Well done.

So simple yet so powerful
i like how you added a twist
made the inspiration more powerful in tihs poem
nice work TJ :)

Wow, this piece is awesome. Its so simple yet it says a lot. Very creative and inspiring in its own way. Excellent write. 5/5