....:..: .. Wow amazing poem..:...:...

Congratulations on the win
It truly deserved it(: x

5/5

This is chilling.. very beautiful, I was readying for pain, but in the end i felt hope. great poem!

This is an amazing poem.

I really like you poem. the title is very catchy that makes me force to read it.. these kind of title are often in my mind and i wrote few poems about it in past. but my idea was a bit different.

and that is how you show us the past. and the memories reflects in your words. i must say its very beautifully written. just like a flowing river, every word is flowing. if someone reads it . he/she definitely will go deep in past.

my favorite lines are

ou were there somewhere in ever
corner of every picture, holding my
hand, or playing with my hair, but
often starring at me when I am
looking elsewhere. Maybe you did
really fall for me all of this time,
but I never looked back to read
what was written in your eyes.
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very lovely and sad.. i can't figure out this stanza. maybe. but i feel it sad.. maybe for someone its lovely..
anyway good work.