I agree to the message of this, animal abuse is something that shouldn't be tolerated.
I think that the poem itself was quite interesting as it is too because of the position you wrote this in. I like the use of repetition, it gives this a lullaby tone , which underlines animals innocence and that it shouldn't be taken from them. Heather, I really enjoy reading your poems and you're definately on my favorites list now! :) Keep up writing.

Aww :(

I'm 100% against animal abuse!
I hate it. The people who do it disgust me.

This is such a cute sad poem. Showing the only thing animals ever really want is to be loved & cared for. Not the complete opposite.

5/5
honest & written from the heart.