Comments : Whispering To The Shores

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    What pain memories can bring, even the sweetest are heartbreaking in the right circumstance. Another touching poem with traces of the bittersweet

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Watching the waves pull out from the shore,
    rain pouring down my rosy cheeks; so cold,
    breathing slowly waiting for my mind to clear,
    wiping my face and whispering "goodbye."
    -This shows how much it pains you to say goodbye to the person you love. To be in your guys spot not being there with him.

    This has beautiful visual. You can see it all in your head as if you were there. Being together with him, then it transforming as in you not.

    Great Job Hun<3

    5/5