I think that this is a very powerful poem and I agree to the message you convey, obviously you're speaking about own experiences, which makes this poem even more touching. I think that it flows well and that your emotions shine through. I wish you best of luck with her.

Thank you, you are right on all counts.
this time she will be mine.

Your poem is beautiful and I think I am falling for you all over again. How can this be happening after all these years.
lots of love JUDY

Its happening again because it has never ended.

Ik heb alles over voor jou.

My favourite.

BIG KISS TO MY POET XXXXX

And a huge kiss to you.