Loved the simplicity of this poem, it delievered the idea in such a calm and easy way.
Flowed nicely, and the wording was just right.

Great job.

What I like about this poem is the simplicity, and that the words aren't force. They run smoothly, I can only say that perhaps one or two commas might be needed but haha who cares. They don't seem to have any importance in this particular poem.

What I like about this poem is the simplicity, and that the words aren't force. They run smoothly, I can only say that perhaps one or two commas might be needed but haha who cares. They don't seem to have any importance in this particular poem.

There are times... when a lot can be learned in a short amount of time... powerful piece~

I think we all will reach this point in life, in some area of our life, relationship, a job, etc there are just some things we find arent meant to be and you just have to be done to have a better future....

I'm not sure if I mentioned to you before, but sometimes capatalizing every sentence takes away from the poem a bit. I bet some commas would help break this poem up a little as well.. other than that, i love you work and will continue reading!