Comments : Will we continue to be?

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Hey thanks for the little note at the end, it is a tough struggle im sure everyone knows that.

    "I was anxious at first like i was just ten."
    I thought this line was so cute, when you fall in love you do feel younger, its a strange but nice thing, very nice actually and i like how you ended the poem. . . . Loss of trust is a huge problem in relationships.....

    Good poem
    :)