Comments : Death is the one to blame...

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    It really is a sad piece and it makes feel lucky and appreciate even more what I have. My parents. Thanks.

    This poem is feel with emotions of sadness but it also shows that that little girl grew up to be strong and loves her mommy so much and also that she knows that her daddy is with her even though death is the one to blame for his abscence. But he is there guiding that little girl's steps. Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Masha2k

    Thank you! It's good to see That someone likes it :)

  • 12 years ago

    by ImperfectlyBeautiful

    I love it, its sad but its also letting you know your gonna be ago life moves on and it will always get better nicely done

  • 12 years ago

    by yogi73

    This might be the saddest poem I have ever read. really well written.