Great job Renegade Angel, it's nice working with you. With you, my work flowed better. This is all you...

Good job.
5/5 from me.

Our hearts fell together and we thought
they were synchronized or intertwined;
I loved you without any breath of doubt.
You shined my eyes.

Openeing lines were mesmoirzing, when you fall completely in love and it is mutual it is the best feeling...thats why i love how you used synchronized or intertwined in this. It is lovely, a conversation between him and her, each side written down. it is quite sad though, lost love is always sad, but good write guys :)

Wow a fantastic job u guys,,I love love loved it! :) it's an amazing write and it's sad,,imagery is great and flow of course,,excellent 5/5