Comments : Am sorry

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Good poem :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Emily Jamie

    It's "I am sorry" or "I'm sorry" not just "am sorry". Other than that, this belongs in quotes not poems and with your quotes; use correct grammar. (This included capitalization. Correct. iNcoRreCt.)

  • 11 years ago

    by LonelySEeker

    Its new style:p
    N by d way dis is n0t an exam or any kind of test 2 use pROper gramMEr..
    UndErStandin is ol dat readErs neEd...n h0pe u did undrSTand dat

  • 11 years ago

    by LonelySEeker

    Its new style:p
    N by d way dis is n0t an exam or any kind of test 2 use pROper gramMEr..
    UndErStandin is ol dat readErs neEd...n h0pe u did undrSTand dat

  • 11 years ago

    by DeafBeats

    I started out very hopeful but then I got a little disappointed at the end.
    I feel like it would have been a much stronger piece if you left out the last line "Am sorry for breaking all the promises" - The flow has been cut because if this line.