Comments : The Hunt

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This piece is so well written. Great job with the descriptions and imagery. The word choice seems to be perfect, awesome job.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A vivid image of a Cheetah on the hunt played out the scene in my mind. Your writing in the mind of a cat works very well in this write. Excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I would only suggest two things. Break this into stanza's and if you do, don't start every word with a capital letter. It just helps the reader read it a little easier.

    Other than that awesome descriptions. I liekd your word choice in this most definitely. I also think The Hunt is a perfect simple title that really just only those 2 words are all you need to desribe this poem.