Comments : A Soul's Elude

  • 12 years ago

    by Whatever works

    I love the intensity of this... the deepness and the darkness. I love it

    Its a very deep poem, fitting content to the title, nice job witth that i cant help but feel as though it was a dark vent as well so it was a good poem :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    This is a very very dark poem with a lot of emotions written.

    As I read this I had an image of a person who either cuts themselves or tries to commit suicide. The bleeding, bandiges and stiches come together in this poem.

    A very sad poem as well - very sorry if this is something you have gone through

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow this is amazing and great fantastically written I loved it and had wonderful wording and very creative splendid excellent job 5/5