...very touching...

Hey Danielle
Aww, that was a really touching poem. I'm not usually a sensitive person in a sense that I cry over people's poems, but this one brought tears to my eyes. Though you wrote of a sad event, you did so with great talent. I liked the flow of the poem as well as the words you have used. Keep your head high and remain strong. Be happy and do things with great effort. I'm sure that is what your grandfather would like for you to do. I wish you all the best and take good care of yourself.
Deepest sympathy,
Kristina

Great poem. It reminds me of my grandpa.. i miss him.. i didnt know him so well cuz he lived so far away and it was 3 days before we were gonna visit him for his birthday party.. and he died on his b-day. =( im sorry bout ur grandpa but you'll one day be reunited. Remember in heaven on day there is a thousand years on earth.. so it wont seem like its been a long time to him when you see him

Great work!!!
-Kellie

I too know what its like to lose a grandpa. My sympathy goes out to you and your family. This poem was beautifully written, and touching. I loved it. Your grandpa will never forget you! Awesomely expressed poem