wow i like this poem. im scared that the relationship i am in might turn into an abusive one. he hasnt actually hit me but he has pushed me and last night we got into a huge fight and i tried to walk away and he pushed me onto the grass and held me down. that was scary but anywho, keep up the good work.
Heather, i've been thru a violent relationship and i hope you realise that you shouldn't have to take that sh*t from any man, just pushing you around is enough and its abuse and you need to walk away now before he really does hurt you honey! Please you seem like a nice person - im sure there is a man out there who will treat you with the dignity and respect you deserve - you dont need that crap at your age - be strong girl
Hey eirisa..im so sorry to hear that $hit happened to you! you seem so sweet and funny how could any man touch you or anyone at this matter! by reading poems about all this stuff with you and your friend and you and your man makes me wanna smack the $hit out of them people who hurt you! i'm her for you although theres a bit of an age difference but thats what im here for! AWSOME JOB ON THIS POEM!
And I echo your words to Heather... no one who is worth it will abuse you, Heather, even in the slightest. Once someone starts down that road, no matter how charming, no matter how wonderful at other times, they've already proven their essence. As Eirisa said, dignity and respect are what you deserve.
Sorry for being so intense, but I've had too many friends go through such abuse.
Wow I loved this poem. I got chills when I was reading it. I really feel you captured the feelings of domestic violance. And the message you are sending out is so true. Society have too start caring and doing something about this problem. I can really relate to this issue since I my self have experienced this. And everyone always hopes that someone will come knocking on that door and save them. Loved this poem. 5/5. Keep it up ;)
This poem is beautiful, and heartfelt. 5/5 stars from me, for sure! And it truly is so sad how many people have to go through that. And sometimes verbal abuse can be just as bad, because even though broken bones heal, a broken soul does not. I know from family experience..it hurts. =/